Veronica Golos

Issue #
March 24, 2019

Review of Sherwin Bitsui’s, "Dissolve"

If you  have ever been in the southwest, the landscape, without the houses and towers, is a layered one --the tan earth, the wide sky, mountains that mold themselves between the two. Sherwin Bitsui's book, Dissolve, incorporates this layering in brilliant and many-faceted ways, in one long poem. 

At first reading, it is Bitsui's images that become the book's top layer:  

A field of moonlight

double-parked in snowmelt


...a tow-truck 

hoisting up a buck

butterflies leaking from its nostrils


Cranes pass as swans

through runnels underneath this dreaming 


Feather-wrapped mountains

unclutter veins to what remains

before sparking fires

where moonlight warms knuckles

wriggling in the slick throats of the drowning.

You can read through this top layer and underline one image after another, until there seems a surfeit of image -- but a slower read, "...breathe it in" is necessary. 

Bubbling beneath this layer, is the poet's use of verbs.  This is important to know, because Bistsui's mother-tongue is Navajo.  Diné Bizaad is a language of verbs, full of movement, phrases and elegant construction.  Phrasing contains motion - the verb of movement "to go" is a basic phrase.  Description is done by the verb aspect of it, how something is made, is being made, in the present tense. 

For example, in a  written discussion between Bistsui and poet Joy Harjo * Bitsui relates trying to re- translate from its English translation, into Navajo, a Li Po poem, which uses the word "wall."  When I asked Bistsui about this in a phone call, he told me, " we would describe the ways it was composed -- a cement rounding the house."  Phrasing in Navajo contains motion, description is the action of the noun, how the noun came to be. Or, what it does.  For example, "clock", would be derived from "it is moved slowly in a circle." 

And, for this poet, both languages congeal inside his imagination and poetry. 

Amber clouds of bone marrow

lathered over corn husks--

are crushed sideways into toothache,

where waning daylight's tongue-scent

bleeds through a flypapered horizon. 


This mountain stands near us: mountaining,

it mistakes morning for mourning

when we wear slippers of steam

to erase our carbon footprint

And of course, Mountaining, flypapered, steam and footprint all achieve movement or the hint of possible movement. 

Here the poet's blend of language, of scene, and of movement shifts between what seems to be worlds: one of landscape and city, of the huge spaces of the Navajo and the jammed town.  But also between the poet and reader, or speaker and listener. Through both image and motion, we are brought into voice and feeling, and into what I consider another layer -- Beauty and its disappearance. 

One might remember and consider the now famous, much-repeated Navajo chant, 

With beauty before me I walk
With beauty behind me I walk
With beauty above me I walk
With beauty around me I walk**

which becomes in Bitsui's language, here and not here, present and taken:

There's a way out--

with the dirt road into cerulean dawn,

tap with clear fingerprints

the windows of cars and trucks

rattling down Highway 77,

and clasp the nine eyes of the desert

shut at the intersection of then and now


The camera sees a storm

its eyes bullet blasts

stacked stop

gas-soaked magpie wings.


A lake, now a tire rut pool,

leaves bitter aftertastes

on single-roomed tongues.

Over and over the poet upturns the landscape, revealing the scabbing beneath. And also, sometimes, it works backwards:  

Neighs spasms onto songs

braiding their highest leaves

into our necklaces of smoke.

And then, like cactus-needles thrusting up through the desert floor, is yet another layer in this important and timely and lovely book.  The aguish and anger of the present day and its history, especially for Indigenous peoples. The remaining uranium leakage, climate change, water contamination, drugs, exile. 

Bluing under a dimming North Star...

the Reservation's ghost..

 Rising out of the uranium pond--


This plate's shape is pawned for bread.

Paper lungs collapse ...

When they seed guns with powdered bone awls,

Who will be injured by such blue dark?


on the shores of evaporating lakes.

This plot, now a hotel garden,

its fountain gushing forth--

the slashed wrists of the Colorado. 

Here, at the heart of what I see in the book, is the madness of a world that slashes the wrists of the Colorado.  Bitsui by using image and  unique juxtaposition, arrives at a kind of rubbing against the stones of the past-present world.  History of this country's ravage of the Indigenous peoples, pebbles through the poem: bison-bone, gun's shadow, hatchet, scalped hair,   we sleep/ collared to our children's nooses.  

These poems are rich in affective and spiritual associations, seeking to put words together in such a way that they release a spiritual and vital action-- giving the reader an experience that enriches, opens a door to the present-past, the past-in-the-present, and is done with a sure hand. 

*The Bomb, Dec.5, 2008 


Dissolve, Copper Canyon Press, 2019, 67 pages, IBSN: 9781556595455,

"...The only way to read Bitsui is to trust his poetic momentum and embrace his brilliant work."—Booklist...Their scraping is a smear facing another smear.Their sky's blue veins are horses neighing through them.

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